Saturday, May 7, 2011

A drop of silence

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 20; the twentieth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.




Clouds overshadow
Raindrops trickle
Lonely road
Wet pavements
Estranged thoughts
Forgotten memories
Young blood
First crush
Eye chemistry
Skipped heartbeat
First date
A dance in the rain
Happy laughter
A moment in time
First kiss
A future promised
Late night calls
Early morning messages
Confession of love
A weekend together
Sudden ring
Unfortunate accident
A rainy day
Black funeral
Broken heart
Bland future
Loveless marriage
A dead life
Echo of laughter
A lonely tear...



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Credits

Image - Window Rain Drops by Eric Alder
Courtesy - http://www.deviantart.com/ via http://www.blogaton.in/
Posted by A.NaaZ at 4:32 AM
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12 comments:

  1. The Aquarian AgeMay 7, 2011 at 5:01 AM

    Thoughtfully true :)

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  2. T F CarthickMay 7, 2011 at 8:49 AM

    Very nice.Used words to powerful effect. You managed to mainain it real terse and it really moves every line instead of beating around the bush and going round and round like usual poems.

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  3. sMay 7, 2011 at 5:05 PM

    Loved it....You narrated a complete story in, like, 30 lines with none of the emotions and feelings missing ! I loved the way ur poem started off on a sad note, burst with happiness in the middle and whittled down to sadness in the end....This is one of my Favs for this B-A-T :)

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  4. Someone is SpecialMay 7, 2011 at 7:08 PM

    Sad, a pwerful poem and I so love your poem..
    "Echo of laughter
    A lonely tear"

    Powerful and awesome.. Glad to have you in Blog-a-Ton..

    Good luck for BAT....and ~ the pic became our.. the home became our... ~

    Someone is Special

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  5. Siddhesh KabeMay 7, 2011 at 9:42 PM

    woah... a story and a poem... thats excellent combination. Good one. :)

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  6. Vinay Leo R.May 8, 2011 at 9:55 AM

    I like how the short lines still convey a lot of power! And that you give a story through ur words! Well written.

    My Blogaton Entry

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  7. tarunimaMay 8, 2011 at 12:56 PM

    i like the way you used short crisp words in your poem which brought an immediate image in the mind:)
    nice:)
    all the best!:)

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  8. FatimaMay 8, 2011 at 2:33 PM

    Sad one but a good one...you conveyed so much so less!

    Good read...my first time here its good!

    Take Care.

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  9. Miss DMay 9, 2011 at 2:04 AM

    I love the template of this blog and what you wove out here is heart rending...

    All the best!

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  10. A.NaaZMay 9, 2011 at 2:31 AM

    Thank you all for the lovely comments! Glad my writing appeals to many. My first time writing for BAT. :)

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  11. JamieDedesMay 14, 2011 at 3:57 PM

    Wow! This really moves at a fearsome pace that enhances the impact of the ending. Nice contribution to Blog-a-Ton.

    Poem on ... :-)

    What a lovely theme, so gentle, soft, peaceful. Lovely!

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  12. A.NaaZMay 15, 2011 at 3:02 AM

    @JamieDedes - Thank you! :)

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